"Innoncence is Bliss" was my favorite essay of the three. I feel it was very well written. I enjoyed the part where Colin's mom was gossiping about all the other girls' dresses using her "petite energetic laugh" . The description of his mom in her "pearly white envoy" was very good. I thought the part about how Colin liked her no matter what she wore. Whether she was "in style" or not, he liked her for who she was.
"Hooked" was also very in depth with imagery. The title itself I believe is clever in the way it is revealing about what the essay is about, yet not too revealing. Meaning, it still leaves you guessing. I love hearing boys and their fishing!
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