All of these essays were very descriptive and nicely written. Faja was my favortie becasue i really enjoyed the tone of the paper. you could tell she/ he had a lot of love for her father. I thought the detail about her father's "blank stare" was a really nice addition to the paper. i feel like the tone changed from when her father got home to when he sat on his rocking chair on the porch. a paper itself was not lacking in descriptive detailing and i was able to picture it well.
The two other essays "painting with neil" and " and "a practiced grace" were also very good essays. i thought it was funny how when i read the titles, i expected the papers to be something completely different!! "Painting with neil" did a nice job with setting a tone and getting in detail with Niel's emotions. "A oacticed grace" did a nice job with going into deep detail with the barista.
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